Wednesday, 17 May 2017

Mean singing inspecter

my name Charles and one day a year the  singing inspecter would come and
He was wearing  false golden teeth and a fake hair and he wears knikerbockers with thick stocking. His face is  round and red his eyes like blue gooseberries. He was the most hatefull person in the universe his Mr Raymond.   But to day he came i was in music class he came dun dun dun he said in a roaring voice get in line and me and benny had to go up and sing we both said we did not know any songs he shouted sing anything i said we will sing pretty poly. I sang in a high voice and benny sang in a squeaking voice. He shouted take them away. That night i had a dream where i slap him so many times that he started sing pretty poly. I was sad that i locked myself in my room for a day. The next day i came out and went to school he was gone i was so happy. That is story

4 comments:

  1. Titus, good story but just check your punctuation

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  2. Awesome story Titus. Like how you say he has a roaring voice.

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  3. I agree with jared good story but you need check puntuation.

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  4. An enjoyable read, Titus! Your dream is really funny. Please edit your grammar and punctuation carefully.

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